Oh. My. God. This is FANTASTIC. The art! The mystery? How did I end up in the ocean? What am I really? The audio? BEAUTIFUL. Stanley is such a gentleman. I love Ford but damn Stan has been drawing me in recently with his suave acts and caring actions. Thank you for creating such a wonderful production.
AAAAAAHH THIS WAS SO GOOD ❗❗ 😋😋😋 the writing is AWESOME and amazingly done, along with the art of the Pines twins and especially the background. For a demo I can already tell I am going to fall in love with the full game when it's out; the way the script reads out like a book to really set the players in the atmosphere is so right up my alley!!! 💘💘💖 please please Please turn this into a full game... need to see more of my beautiful babygirls
10/10 really cool 10/10 10/10 100000000000/10 wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww10348070327642284292403827399123207997831914103480703276422842924038273991034807032764221232079978319141034807032764221232079978319148429240382739910348070327642212320799783191410348070327642284292403827399103480703276422123207997831914103480703276422842924038273991034807032764221232079978319141034807032764228429240382739910348070327642212320799783191410348070327642284292403827399123207997831914103480703276422842924038273991034807032764221232079978319141034807032764228429240382739984292403827399wwwwwww just good whoever made this is the best storymaker ever
LOVE LOVE LOVE!! Writing & language is fantastic & the art style is beautiful (I love the hands). My friend & i played it together & we can see there was a lot of passion in this project. NEED THE FULL GAME ASAP!!!!! I <3 Ford & the unicorn plush
Очень круто! Я очень рада тому что сейчас будет новая игра про моих любимых мужчин. Но я буду безумно расстроенна, если у Стэна сново ветка будет интереснее чем у Форда. Я люблю Форда больше. Можно пожалуйста, чтобы истории были одинаково интересными
Thank you so much! And yes, Stan and Ford’s routes will be equal. My writing for Ford didn’t do his character justice in the demo so I will be improving on that for the final game! :D I can’t leave my Ford enjoyers hanging! 😂💙
I desperately need more! Despite the short length of the demo by the time i reached the end i had almost forgotten it was a demo! This is awesome and I can't wait for more!
I absolutely adored this! The writing had me "hooked" (haha fish pun) the whole time! I feel like you got the characterization of the twins really well, and I love the idea that the player themselves are an anomaly. I can tell the plot is going to reel me in, hook, line, and sinker (I'm sorry, I can't resist the opportunity for puns lol). I'm so intrigued to find out more of the player's backstory. Keep up the fantastic work! I'm greatly looking forward to the full release!
I been keeping up with stuff about this game, finally played it and holy moly it's amazing!! I was confused a bit how the hell did the character aka the player even got in that situation but oooo I love how it can also keep players intrigued and make an interesting story plot!! (like how the player even knows what a kraken truly is like as if they're a pirate!) the writing overall is already great!, style? ABSOLUTELY!!! it's absolutely amazing especially with the colors giving off vibes that's like really in tone with the scene yk?. I'm so interested to see how this'll goes! especially the story since I'm a sucker for stories, though not sure if you guys are okay with criticism but the only thing is that the story felt a bit fast not that its a demo but player already having like growing feelings (for Stan since I went with his route I haven't checked ford's) with the 'nice' options (again will replay to check the other options) I think it would be neat if the feelings are a bit slow yk? once Stan or ford shows more like their personality, more interactions, etc but that's just my thoughts and opinions. overall amazing game!! :D (ps, I'm a idiot I thought the warmth feeling meant like romantic when it was about the beer/alcohol LOL but ooooo I just love the writing already!!)
EEE omg thank you so much !! I'm a sucker for stories, too, so I'm so so excited to share what I'm developing lore-wise!
And I absolutely agree with your criticism, tysm for pointing that out! (I encourage all the feedback/criticism, it genuinely helps me so much!) I decided to make the demo fast-paced since I was trying to make a condensed preview of what a longer game could be like. For the full game, it'll be slower-paced and have more detail! :D
THIS IS SO CUTE AHHHH I LOVE THE ARTSTYLE HEERREE!!1!! I LOVE THE VIBES, THE SPRITES, THE MUSIC, DIALOGUE! PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THIS PROJECT, BUT DRINK WATER & TAKE BREAKS TOO!! YOU'RE AWESOMESAUCE FOR THIS, N DON'T LET ANYONE TELL YOU OTHERWISE!!
OMG THIS DATING SIM IS SO AMAZING!! I love the art style and the music, it's literal a masterpiece and well can't wait to see more, PLEASE 😩 I need to know what happens next! :D
INSANELY PRETTY, im hoping the fast pace was to give the player a better taste of the full product within a limited demo, it would be nice if even just the prologue was more stretched out. writing feels good, tho i wouldn't neccesarily call stan the one that looks trusting xd neither are trusting, i see ford as one for whom curiosity could win over distrust. Tuning in to see the progress, gl with the work <3
THANK YOU SO MUCH!! <3<3 And I agree with the writing about the Stans' trust! That's something I'm super excited to revise for the full game!
The demo's length was definitely just to see what everyone thinks and give an example of what the game will be like since this was my first time making something like this :3 I'm planning on letting the writing breathe more for the full version! :D
pretty fun! i loved the characterizations and the art is beautiful, its clear this was made with love. however, (and im no doctor nor am i criticizing) perhaps you should fix the medical procedure done on our character? maybe i misunderstood, but we were pierced by a harpoon, right? in that case the wound should be sewn up i think.
Plus it´d be a nice way to get closer to each twin, either by having stan share a little story about how he learned to sew skin during his outlaw years or by us noticing fords six fingers. idkkkk i loved this tho, cant wait to see the final result <333
I so agree with the medical part!! I realized the wound would need sewn before the demo was released, so I was like 'AW DANG I'm too late! 😂'
I'll definitely adjust that section so it's more accurate and, of course, more time with the twins 🤭🤭<3 Tysm for playing and for the feedback, it genuinely means so much !! :D <3<3
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OH MY GOOOOOOD THIS IS WOW. /pos
Oh. My. God. This is FANTASTIC. The art! The mystery? How did I end up in the ocean? What am I really? The audio? BEAUTIFUL. Stanley is such a gentleman. I love Ford but damn Stan has been drawing me in recently with his suave acts and caring actions. Thank you for creating such a wonderful production.
AAAAAAHH THIS WAS SO GOOD ❗❗ 😋😋😋 the writing is AWESOME and amazingly done, along with the art of the Pines twins and especially the background. For a demo I can already tell I am going to fall in love with the full game when it's out; the way the script reads out like a book to really set the players in the atmosphere is so right up my alley!!! 💘💘💖 please please Please turn this into a full game... need to see more of my beautiful babygirls
It's perfect, I'm impressed with how well it's done for a demo, I can't wait to see the full game!!
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my husband Stans looks sooooo good i love this demo KKKKKKK
10/10 really cool 10/10 10/10 100000000000/10 wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww10348070327642284292403827399123207997831914103480703276422842924038273991034807032764221232079978319141034807032764221232079978319148429240382739910348070327642212320799783191410348070327642284292403827399103480703276422123207997831914103480703276422842924038273991034807032764221232079978319141034807032764228429240382739910348070327642212320799783191410348070327642284292403827399123207997831914103480703276422842924038273991034807032764221232079978319141034807032764228429240382739984292403827399wwwwwww just good whoever made this is the best storymaker ever
LOVE LOVE LOVE!! Writing & language is fantastic & the art style is beautiful (I love the hands). My friend & i played it together & we can see there was a lot of passion in this project. NEED THE FULL GAME ASAP!!!!!
I <3 Ford & the unicorn plush
10/10 this is fantastic!
RAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH THIS IS SO GOODDDD
I love that we are an anomaly and I can't wait for more! <3
so lovely, the art and the writing are incredible. definitely hope to see more!
i love this game already GUHHHHHH its like all the other wips i love graahhh!!!! so excited for developmen
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Очень круто! Я очень рада тому что сейчас будет новая игра про моих любимых мужчин. Но я буду безумно расстроенна, если у Стэна сново ветка будет интереснее чем у Форда. Я люблю Форда больше. Можно пожалуйста, чтобы истории были одинаково интересными
Thank you so much! And yes, Stan and Ford’s routes will be equal. My writing for Ford didn’t do his character justice in the demo so I will be improving on that for the final game! :D I can’t leave my Ford enjoyers hanging! 😂💙
Thank you for playing! 💙💙💙
This is so sweet and cozy omggg!
I only did it for the meme
This is cute.
I desperately need more! Despite the short length of the demo by the time i reached the end i had almost forgotten it was a demo! This is awesome and I can't wait for more!
I absolutely adored this! The writing had me "hooked" (haha fish pun) the whole time! I feel like you got the characterization of the twins really well, and I love the idea that the player themselves are an anomaly. I can tell the plot is going to reel me in, hook, line, and sinker (I'm sorry, I can't resist the opportunity for puns lol). I'm so intrigued to find out more of the player's backstory. Keep up the fantastic work! I'm greatly looking forward to the full release!
Thank you so much!! <3<3 And I'm such a sucker for puns, I'm giggling over them right now BAHAH
Tysm for playing !! :D
I been keeping up with stuff about this game, finally played it and holy moly it's amazing!! I was confused a bit how the hell did the character aka the player even got in that situation but oooo I love how it can also keep players intrigued and make an interesting story plot!! (like how the player even knows what a kraken truly is like as if they're a pirate!) the writing overall is already great!, style? ABSOLUTELY!!! it's absolutely amazing especially with the colors giving off vibes that's like really in tone with the scene yk?. I'm so interested to see how this'll goes! especially the story since I'm a sucker for stories, though not sure if you guys are okay with criticism but the only thing is that the story felt a bit fast not that its a demo but player already having like growing feelings (for Stan since I went with his route I haven't checked ford's) with the 'nice' options (again will replay to check the other options) I think it would be neat if the feelings are a bit slow yk? once Stan or ford shows more like their personality, more interactions, etc but that's just my thoughts and opinions. overall amazing game!! :D (ps, I'm a idiot I thought the warmth feeling meant like romantic when it was about the beer/alcohol LOL but ooooo I just love the writing already!!)
EEE omg thank you so much !! I'm a sucker for stories, too, so I'm so so excited to share what I'm developing lore-wise!
And I absolutely agree with your criticism, tysm for pointing that out! (I encourage all the feedback/criticism, it genuinely helps me so much!) I decided to make the demo fast-paced since I was trying to make a condensed preview of what a longer game could be like. For the full game, it'll be slower-paced and have more detail! :D
Thank you so much for playing !! <3<3
OOOOOOOOOOOO U ATE THIS
AHHHHHH I LOVE IT OMG
I LOVE ITTT!! PLEASE FINISH ITT TTOTT <3
PLEASE finish this i love it!!!
I'M CACKLING AT THIS/POS just the idea of Ford calling someone "sexyman" is so funny to me 🤣🤣
Thanks for the reply you should finish the game :)
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA I LOVE IT OMG
THIS IS SO CUTE AHHHH I LOVE THE ARTSTYLE HEERREE!!1!!
I LOVE THE VIBES, THE SPRITES, THE MUSIC, DIALOGUE! PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THIS PROJECT, BUT DRINK WATER & TAKE BREAKS TOO!! YOU'RE AWESOMESAUCE FOR THIS, N DON'T LET ANYONE TELL YOU OTHERWISE!!
AAAA THANK YOU SO MUCH I RLY APPRECIATE IT !!! TYSM FOR PLAYINGGG !! <3<3<3
THIS IS SO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD OMG LOVE THIS SO MUCHHHH AHHHHH!!!!!!
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE finish this oh my GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD I'm gonna freak
giggling and kicking my feet in the air
So good! Cant wait for the next update. Super happy it is gender neutral so far
I love it please please pleaseeeee finish it
I LOVE THIS GAME I NEED DAY 2 I BEG YOU ( i'm in love with the art style
I LOVE THIS
SO cute!! But I wish it was longer because now I want moreee!! Can't wait for the full game<33
OMG THIS DATING SIM IS SO AMAZING!! I love the art style and the music, it's literal a masterpiece and well can't wait to see more, PLEASE 😩 I need to know what happens next! :D
INSANELY PRETTY, im hoping the fast pace was to give the player a better taste of the full product within a limited demo, it would be nice if even just the prologue was more stretched out. writing feels good, tho i wouldn't neccesarily call stan the one that looks trusting xd neither are trusting, i see ford as one for whom curiosity could win over distrust. Tuning in to see the progress, gl with the work <3
THANK YOU SO MUCH!! <3<3 And I agree with the writing about the Stans' trust! That's something I'm super excited to revise for the full game!
The demo's length was definitely just to see what everyone thinks and give an example of what the game will be like since this was my first time making something like this :3 I'm planning on letting the writing breathe more for the full version! :D
TYSM FOR PLAYING AAA !! <3
pretty fun! i loved the characterizations and the art is beautiful, its clear this was made with love. however, (and im no doctor nor am i criticizing) perhaps you should fix the medical procedure done on our character? maybe i misunderstood, but we were pierced by a harpoon, right? in that case the wound should be sewn up i think.
Plus it´d be a nice way to get closer to each twin, either by having stan share a little story about how he learned to sew skin during his outlaw years or by us noticing fords six fingers. idkkkk i loved this tho, cant wait to see the final result <333
I so agree with the medical part!! I realized the wound would need sewn before the demo was released, so I was like 'AW DANG I'm too late! 😂'
I'll definitely adjust that section so it's more accurate and, of course, more time with the twins 🤭🤭<3 Tysm for playing and for the feedback, it genuinely means so much !! :D <3<3
so gooood