Sailing with Stans - A Sea Grunks Dating Sim (DEMO)

INSANELY PRETTY, im hoping the fast pace was to give the player a better taste of the full product within a limited demo, it would be nice if even just the prologue was more stretched out. writing feels good, tho i wouldn't neccesarily call stan the one that looks trusting xd neither are trusting, i see ford as one for whom curiosity could win over distrust. Tuning in to see the progress, gl with the work <3

pretty fun! i loved the characterizations and the art is beautiful, its clear this was made with love. however,  (and im no doctor nor am i criticizing) perhaps you should fix the medical procedure done on our character? maybe i misunderstood, but we were pierced by a harpoon, right? in that case the wound should be sewn up i think.

 Plus it´d be a nice way to get closer to each twin, either by having stan share a little story about how he learned to sew skin during his outlaw years or by us noticing fords six fingers. idkkkk i loved this tho, cant wait to see the final result <333

if this doesn't turn into a full game i'm going to send my guinea pig to Ecuador and it will be YOUR fault

DUDE I SAW THIS ON TIK TOK AND I WAS SO HAPPY WHEN I SAW THAT YOU RELEASED THE DEMO!!! I LOVE YOUR ART STYLE AND EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS,, I HOPE YOU FINISH THE GAME AND MAKE IT DOWNLOADABLE :D

AGH! Made an account just so I can say how fucking cute this is-- can't wait to see more of Stan's route

loved this demo!! very exited for a full release!

i did have an issue getting it to run on firefox so i had to run it on microsoft edge so im not sure what that's about - not sure if its on issue on my end or yours but it ran perfectly find on edge :]

this game so far is marvelous and highly comforting in mood, especially with the way the art and colors are used!
Constructive criticism cause yk this is a game in making and just a "wow! so fire" isn't really helpful lol
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The game took me a second to boot up and I had to reload the tab due to a small error with the program downloading and running but that might be my PC so i wouldn't take that as a huge issue as it was a easy reload fix 
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Some suggestions for the storylines expression:
- Small sound affects from characters (ex. grunts when there's physical exertion)
-Sound for specific movement of objects, from the POV of the player and from other characters (such as a rustle when going through papers or a water splash if someone jumps in, etc.)
- Color tone shifts to add to the mood of a moment. Like a warm sunrise tone with a horizon line clearly highlighted in a specific scene. Its a romance game, so colors on the warmer side. This can be added with simple lighting on one of the Stans through lamps, sunlight, and any fire light in a entire scene or just a few pieces of art rather than main dialogue.
-For Stanford's writing in specific, I would recommend having him not really treat the player as anything but an anomaly at first, but build up to seeing the player as more human and existing with yk, thoughts and feelings. I do really enjoy the notes of his passion to anomalies, and would love to see that further utilized in the storyline!

Any inconsistencies I noticed:
Movement of the moon and angel doesn't match up when going inside of the ship - when on the doc you're viewing from the side and you're head-on to the moon, but when you go into Fords study its directly facing you through the window even though you should've been facing further west, not being head on to it.
Ford is inconsistently hesitant to not hesitant. At the beginning, there's a weird mix of fascination with the player, poking his nose into looking and examining. Then it switches to being too hesitant to get too close. An easy fix would be trying to more clearly express that he wouldn't want Stanley to be too close, or to make him more hesitant at the beginning before being reassured by the players action or his brother.


Again, wonderful game, and I can't wait to see more of it in the future!